Thursday, April 26, 2012


Jacob Cabral

Professor Broadous

PAS113B

26 April 2012

To Die a Man: A Literary Analysis

            When the word "hog" comes across a conversation what do you think of? By definition, a hog is a domesticated swine weighing 120 pounds or more and is raised for market. However, the term is also identified as a selfish, gluttonous, or filthy person. In A Lesson Before Dying, a novel authored by Ernest J. Gaines, the primary character known as Jefferson is acknowledged as a hog by his peers. The reason behind this degrading identification is owed by Jefferson being in the wrong place at the wrong time. In the novel, Jefferson is accused of robbing and murdering bystanders in a gas station. It was a crime Jefferson did not commit. Throughout the story we see Jefferson belittled and diminished by others inside and outside of the court room. He is practically bullied to the point where he begins to believe he really is a hog. In respect to his disheartened well  being and mindset, he begins to act like and metaphorically become a hog. For the duration of the book, Jefferson is on a journey accompanied by Grant, a school teacher, who is attempting to shape Jefferson into the man he really is and liberate him of the comparison of an unintelligent hog which he bears. A major aspect of this novel is the theme of racism. Throughout this book, racism is seen behind every word, paragraph, and chapter. Due to its setting, the book is filled with the degradation of African Americans. Racism impacts the intriguing story of Jefferson, while demonstrating to the reader a saddening yet truthful view on African American lives in the 1940s. Racism empowers this novel by branching into the words on each page, the characters, and the plot.

            Words can transform the feeling of a conversation, a sentence, and even a chapter of a book. In this case, this reference is made towards the words used by Ernest J. Gaines. The way Gaines incorporates his vocabulary and his placement of words adds to the consistent sense that there is racism amid the chapters of this novel. For example, the school teacher who taught Grant before he became a teacher, known as Matthew Antoine, is written saying to Grant, “‘I can’t tell you anything about life. You want to know about life? Well, it’s too late. Forget it. Just go on and be the nigger you were born to be, but forget about life.’” (Gaines 65). This is Antoine's response to Grant's inquiries about being a man in the south. Antoine reflects to Grant that the only way to live a life without the setbacks brought on by the racist white environment is to run away and make a new life for one's self. However, Grant does not leave; he stays in the city of Bayonne, Louisiana. To add, the way Gaines uses the word "nigger" is so abrupt and tongue-in-cheek that it surprises the audience while still captivating their attention. Gaines has a way with incorporating this theme into his book very skillfully. Moreover, when the lawyer of Jefferson is somewhat defending him, he talks of Jefferson as if he were an animal stating, "'...do you see a man sitting here? ... A cornered animal to strike quickly out of fear, a trait inherited from his ancestors in the deepest jungle of blackest Africa... What you see here is a thing that acts on command... What justice would it be to take this life? ...Why, I would just as soon put a hog in the electric chair as this.'" (Gaines 7-8). Within this quote, Gaines expands on racism by having the lawyer associate Jefferson with the inhabitants of the "deepest jungle of blackest Africa". By doing this, an illustration of disrespect and insolence is presented. Also, it recalls the persistent perceptions of African Americans as no more than savages or beasts. Gaines develops this story to the point it is apparent that one of his many themes is racism.

            Illustrating character development in a story is an ideal component. It shapes the characters to who they are, while adding a connection where the reader can relate to a sole character. Gaines goes about the progression of each of his characters distinctively. He gives them a background and a way of life. Racism is associated in the lives of these characters by the use of treatment from other characters. In proof, Jefferson is quoted saying, "'It look like the lord just work for wite folks cause ever sens I wasn nothin but a litle boy I been on my own haulin water to the fiel on that ol water cart wit all them dime bukets.'" (Gaines 227). Here, Gaines accentuates how Jefferson is unsure about religion due to the disrespect and treatment he's gotten throughout his twenty-one years of living. On the other hand, even though racism is what makes these characters who they are, it also changes and molds them to a different person towards the end of a book. For instance, when first meeting Jefferson, Grant wasn't interested in sculpting him to become a man or having anything to do with him. Conversely, his idea of Jefferson changed by the end of the story. He began to care for Jefferson and wanted to prove to their peers that he is a man. Giving his full respect to Jefferson, Grant is quoted saying, “'A hero does for others. He would do anything for people he loves, because he knows it would make their lives better. I am not that kind of person, but I want you to be. You could give something to her, to me, to those children in the quarter. You could give something I never could ... The white people out there are saying you don’t have it—that you’re a hog, not a man. But I know they are wrong.” (Gaines 191). Gaines proves that although Jefferson is seen as a worthless and unintelligent animal, he is better than the racist community who sentenced him to his end. In Grant's eyes, he is seen as a hero. While guiding Jefferson to realize this, Grant learned more about himself and acquired a new view on life. To add, Mary Ellen Doyle, author of Voices from the Quarters states, "The chief evidence of change throughout, in this novel as in A Gathering of Old Men, is the sound of voices, the shift in voices of power, and the sheer increase of willingness and ability to speak, to communicate genuinely with other human beings." (Doyle 208-209).

            The plot of A Lesson Before Dying is intriguing in that it bears the question, "Would you want to die with dignity or die as an entitled hog?" From the start, Jefferson was belittled by his peers. Jefferson was content with being sentenced to death because he knew there was nothing he could do to change it. His lawyer had no respect for him and basically convinced the jury to commit him as guilty. The lawyer's prejudice and racist attitude towards Jefferson's case is what catapults racism in the story. An author known as Valerie Babb has talked about the treatment of Jefferson by his lawyer stating, "...his defense lawyer pleads his client's innocence not on the basis of facts, which might prove that racist presumptions rather than evidence lead to Jefferson's conviction, but rather by likening his intellectual capabilities to those of a hog." (Babb 252). As it can be related to the famous novel, Of Mice and Men written by John Steinbeck, Jefferson and the character of Lennie are similar in the way of their intelligence. Although Lennie was white and Jefferson was African American, they were both treated poorly due to their lack of intelligence. Lennie would be heckled for being mentally handicapped, while Jefferson would be tormented by the wrongful punishment which was put on him by his peers. "'S'pose you had to sit here an' read books...Books ain't no good'" (Steinbeck 4), was quotes in the Steinbeck novel. This signifies that just because someone may be portrayed as unintelligent or meaningless does not mean that person cannot push himself to be better than what is expected of him. Lennie would be told that books are not good for him because he did not have a good intellect; whereas, Jefferson would be called a hog for being dumb and for the way he presented himself. Even though Lennie was not judged by the color of his skin, prejudiced views from others are what tore him up unside. For Jefferson, racism is what made him believe and become a hog. Gaines' point of view on the theme of racism elaborates within the plot uniquely. He exercises his method of speech from page to page.

“Do you know what a myth is, Jefferson? A myth is an old lie that people believe in. White people believe that they’re better than anyone else on earth - and that’s a myth. The last thing they ever want is to see a black man stand, and think, and show that common humanity that is in us all. It would destroy their myth. They would no longer have justification for having made us slaves and keeping us in the condition we are in. As long as none of us stand they’re safe. They’re safe with me. They’re safe with Reverend Ambrose. I don’t want them to feel safe with you anymore.” (Gaines 192)

            Grant declared this statement to Jefferson after realizing that the white men aren't stronger or better than them. Grant had an epiphany that no man is greater or exceptional than one another and that if they prove to themselves that they stand with dignity then they have overcome their tormenters. This quote embodies the whole story of A Lesson Before Dying. It emulates their journey of the discovery of the selves they did not know they had. Racism impacted the lives of all the characters throughout this story. Racism is what got Jefferson to be accused of murder and robbery. It is what committed him of a crime he did not commit. It is what gave him the undeserving name of a hog. It is what sentenced him to death as a man with dignity. Gaines' way of teaching us about the struggles and hardships of the primary characters of Jefferson and Grant help us relate to them. Within this consummation, we know that a major theme of this story is racism. Nonetheless, a lesson to be learned here is that people may misjudge you and purposely try to bring you down, but it is your character that shines through and must show a sense of pride and dignity. Without pride and dignity a man has nothing to show forth. Paul was a witness the day that Jefferson's life ended. He told Grant, "he was the strongest man in that crowded room, Grant Wiggins" (Gaines 253).  A honorable lesson here in this novel is to have faith and let God lead you down the right path. No matter your race or belief God will be accepting of you at all times. This modern day classic novel got to where it is today because of the values and lessons it teaches. Not only is it teaching you to keep faith, but it is also justifying how one man's road to dignity can affect the lives of many different people around him. Earnest J. Gaines' novel, A Lesson Before Dying, centers around the strife towards the qualities of dying with dignity and becoming a man.































Work Cited

Doyle, Mary Ellen. Voices from the Quarters: The Fiction of Ernest J. Gaines. Baton Rouge: Louisiana State UP, 2002. Print.

Estes, David C. Critical Reflections on the Fiction of Ernest J. Gaines. Athens: University of Georgia, 1994. Print.

Gaines, Ernest J. A Lesson before Dying. New York: A. A. Knopf, 1993. Print.

Steinbeck, John. Of Mice and Men. New York: Penguin, 1993. Print.


Thursday, March 22, 2012


Jacob Cabral

Professor Broadous

PAS 113B

22 March 2012

Stuck In a Hard Place: A Life in Poverty

            Much has happened since the early dawning days of America. There have been wars, catastrophes, and major political events. Many of these events in our history have changed the way we approached things and reformed our mindset of how we live our everyday lives. The recession of America’s economy, including the downfall of jobs, have been going on for a lot of years. Throughout these years, numerous amounts of people have lost their jobs and have gone into poverty. That is still the case now. It is sad to see families living in poverty and not being able to live the average American life; to not be able to prepare and eat breakfast, lunch, and dinner with their family. Majority of families in poverty consist of two parents, but there are some consisting of a single parent. Among these families are the kids. They take it the hardest when it comes to adjusting to living in a car or on the street. It is a struggle and a major life adjustment. By changing the place where one lives so drastically, it may alter their well-being. Poverty does shape a person's worldview. It impacts that person in every way thinkable. Poverty is destroying the lives of many Americans and the reason why is due to the lack of jobs, the descending economy, and the misuse of welfare.

            Before collecting the data for this essay, I went to a shelter to observe and study people in poverty. The shelter I attended was made for families in need of a place to stay, known as Los Angeles Family Housing. At L.A. Family Housing, they also provided classes to build their well-being and to help them create a better budget when using their money. Places like this shelter are what keep families from living on the streets when losing their job. When losing a job, it is hard to get back on track financially and in life. It might take a while for them to find a decent paying job unless they are determined and look for a job continuously. Therefore, when there is no more money to spend and they realize they no longer have a place to stay, shelters are a good thing to have. However, having so many shelters can also keep people from working hard. Some might think of it as a way to have free housing. Majority of parents do not stop working just so they can have a free place to live; they actually care enough about their children to keep a steady and well-paying job. It is heartbreaking to know that there are parents willing to do this so they can get by freely. Overall, it is hard for the majority of families to live the perfect life and not have to struggle with financial obligations. Nowadays, it is rare to see the average American not in poverty. It is becoming a normal situation, sadly. “By some measures…two parent families are the least secure members of society, for they get little in the way of income or medical supports despite their vulnerability to swings in the economy” (Ellwood 81). Parents are fighting to keep balanced lives for their children and it is unfortunate to see that two parent families are the least protected.

            America’s economy has been drifting further and further into debt. This has been an ongoing process for many years now. “During the first half of the 1900s, the widening gap between the rich and the poor continued and the growing distance between the wealthy and the middle class became apparent” (Axinn & Levin 306). From this quote, you can see that our country’s economy has been taking an immense toll on the lives of its citizens, especially the lives of the children. “Twenty-six percent of all children under the age of 6, some 6 million children, were poor in 1992.” (Axinn & Levin 308). This is disturbing to know that only 20 years ago, kids were living their lives in poverty. That amount has now increased to even more children living day to day without a single meal or bed to sleep in. In the video, Throwaway People, families were shown living their lives while in poverty. There was a scene in which it depicted the family residing and sleeping in their minivan. The children talked about and described the ways they would get dressed and how they would eat. They would use the public restrooms in parks to merely brush their teeth and wash themselves off; a simple way they were able to bathe themselves. When it came to food they would "ask other kids if they didn't want what was on their plate" or "if they were going to finish that" just so they could eat and share what they were able to scrap with the rest of their family (PBS: Throwaway People). It is horrible to see families, especially children, have to search and always be on the lookout for food. They should be able to have three meals a day and not have to worry about at least eating once a day. Places like the L.A. Family Housing Shelter help those types of families. At this shelter they provide three hardy and healthy meals a day for the families staying there. Without these places, members of families would be so hungry they'd be in pain and might die. Spaces like this give me the vision of a better place for those in poverty in the future.

            The welfare system was introduced to the United States beginning in the 1930s during the Great Depression. From this plan, the government would aid those in need by providing general welfare payments, health care through Medicaid, food stamps, special payments for pregnant women and young mothers, and federal and state housing benefits. This was a big deal for those in poverty. Due to the welfare system, the growing inequality of income and wealth occurred. "To 'get the economy going'," Ronald Reagan decided that "the federal budget was to be balanced...by cutting back on food, health, housing, job training, and income programs for the poor while simultaneously cutting taxes for upper-income groups hoping to increase their investments" (Axinn & Levin 306). By doing this, citizens in the U.S. were unable to fully live their lives how they used to. Nonetheless, this inspired some people to work hard for what they needed and encouraged them to get jobs. In 1981, President Ronald Reagan told a story to an audience about a woman on welfare and how she dealt with the cut on welfare. He talked about how his cuts "allowed her to break free from welfare dependence" (Chappell 199). This woman didn't have to rely on welfare after Reagan's bold decision. She was able to take care of herself because of the courage and faith that the cuts on welfare gave her. Welfare is a good thing for those in need, but it also may hold others back in attempting to get jobs and living an independent life.

            Poverty is in our everyday lives. It surrounds us no matter what. Many things can lead someone to go into poverty, but there are ways to stay out of it. Avoid poverty by keeping a budget of how much you spend and make sure you have a job that keeps you financially stable. If you do not have a job you're sure about, have a backup plan. Reasons behind people ending up in poverty are low wages, having children when not financially able to take care of them, and having only one parent work and make money instead of the two. In addition, the Los Angeles Family Housing shelter is a great way to get back on your feet if you're struggling with money. It helps you get back on track with your life by providing shelter, classes on overall improvement, and meals. This type of space is what makes life better and those in need happier. You can get out of poverty, but it just takes time.











Works Cited

            Axinn, June, and Herman Levin. Social Welfare: A History of the American Response to Need.      New York: Dodd, Mead, 1975. Print.

            Chappell, Marisa. The War on Welfare: Family, Poverty, and Politics in Modern America. Philadelphia: University of Pennsylvania, 2010. Print.

            Ellwood, David T. Poor Support: Poverty in the American Family. New York: Basic, 1988.          Print.

PBS: Throwaway People

Wednesday, February 22, 2012


The Project

            Carly Mallone, a girl of beauty and a passion for success, was always eager to be number one in everything she did. She'd come up with the best ideas for projects and have the best essays in class. She inherited her characteristics from her father, whom was the CEO of a major business. She wanted to attend a high-end university since she has always set her goals so high. She's always aimed for the greatest and has always achieved the greatest so she knew it would be easy for her to do. However, one thing stood in her way; she still did not have an idea for her final project in her psychology class. Ideas would go in and out of her head like a gofer in its hole. She had to think of something profound and unique so she can get an A to get accepted to the school of her dreams.

            While in class one day, she noticed one of her classmates whom she never realized was in her class. She saw him talking to some girls that were working on their class work. It seemed like they were irritated with him talking to them. She heard the guy say that he had webbed toes. After hearing that they told him to go away and that he was annoying. His name was Seth Cox. He was part of the group of outcasts in the school. He would attempt to hit on girls with the assumption of hooking up but it never worked. Girls saw him as a desperate loser who couldn't accomplish anything. His sophomore year, he was forced to assist with hosting the annual school talent show for getting in a fight with his enemy, Bradley Montgomery. Halfway through the talent show he deserted the show because he didn't care for his punishment and thought it was stupid. After staring at Seth for a good amount time, Carly realized he had also been staring at her smiling. She abruptly turned away and acted as if she was busy with her class work.

            Throughout the next week, Carly would notice how Seth was around other people and how he'd put himself in awkward situations. Carly was still struggling with figuring out what to do for her final project in psychology class. No good ideas would pop in her head until one day in class in which she noticed Seth being rejected by a girl to go on a date with him. She had an epiphany. She wanted Seth to be her boyfriend; a fake boyfriend. After class, Carly hesitantly yet eagerly approached Seth to talk to him. He was surprised and didn't know what to do or say. The first thing to come out of his mouth was, "Do you want to go out sometime? I know a great deal at KFC" with Carly answering with, "Actually, yes." Seth was in amazement by what had just happened. Thoughts were streaming through his head rapidly. Was his flirty comments finally working? Was his "sexy" curly hair finally turning on the ladies? Did his outcast-rebel-John Bender from The Breakfast Club look finally entice the ladies to want to approach him? His thoughts were interrupted by Carly subjecting that there was a catch to the whole thing. She told him that they wouldn't really be going out, but pretending to be going out. She told him about her idea for the final project and how they could study people's reactions to the somewhat outlandish idea. They would take notes and write whatever it is that people in their school say or do following the coming out of their "relationship".

            Seth was confused with the whole thing. Carly with the urge for an answer told him about how if she were to get an A on this project then she would be able to attend the school of her dreams. She also said how his peers and the school wouldn't see him as a loser who can't accomplish anything anymore if he were to get an A on the project. He agreed but only under his own terms. He told Carly, "For us to make this as realistic as possible, we have to actually act like a couple; not just hold hands and all that stupid crap. You know...like make out and stuff." Carly, with disgust, said no and began to walk away. With the chance of finally being seen with a beautiful girl, Seth rushed to Carly and said that they "don't have to make out and stuff." Carly agreed and they shook hands. The project had begun.

            The next day at school Carly and Seth arrived hand in hand walking through the hallways. Jaws were dropping on the floor everywhere they'd go. Girls looked at Carly in confusion, while the guys were cheering Seth on. Seth had never felt this happy in his life. He walked Carly to class. While standing at the door, he leaned forward for a kiss, but Carly moved quick and let him kiss her on the cheek. Without anyone looking she kneed Seth in the groin and said, "Bye, honey!" A little squeal could be heard from Seth as he said bye.

            The project had been going on for two weeks now with everyone believing it was real. The whole social scene of the school was changing. The losers were getting the hot girls. All of the guys were treating Seth with respect even being part of his entourage. Carly was slowly losing her best friends. Every day after school, Carly and Seth would meet and take down notes of what they heard people say or do during each day. The notes were piling up. Their relationship was becoming a big part of the talk around school. As the days would go on, Carly became miserable with what people were saying about her. She didn't expect for her to get the bad comments by doing this project. Seth was getting positive feedback from everybody saying how cool of a guy he really is and how him going out with Carly was a good thing because they finally got to know him. Carly was starting to realize how good of a guy he is too, but it was hard for her to see him with this newfound popularity.

            It had been a month since they began the project and it was now concluding. Carly met at Seth's place to go over the results of the final week of the project. After reviewing everything, it finally hit Carly that she had no one to call her friend anymore due to the rude comments being said by all of the people she had once considered to be her friends. While sitting on Seth's bed she began to cry. Seth didn't know what to do. He leaned forward and instead of urging for a kiss, he gave her a hug and said that everything was going to be okay. Astonished, Carly looked at him and kissed him. Now, Seth was surprised. When she pulled her lips away from his, her mind realized that throughout the month that the project had been going on, she grew feelings for him. Seth's reaction was one simple word: "Whoa". Carly told him that she was sorry, but Seth answered back with another kiss.

            At the beginning of another week of school, Carly and Seth were ready to tell everybody of their fake relationship. During psychology class, they presented their project and told everybody that they were studying their peers and their reactions to the relationship. Everyone was in awe and somewhat angry. Carly and Seth would deal with the harsh comments from their classmates and some teachers, but they knew everything would settle down after a while. Later that day, Carly brought up to Seth how her and him had kissed the other day. She asked if it would lead anywhere like to an actual relationship. They began to kiss with him looking in her eyes with passion as she gazed into his with an adoring façade and they both said, "Nah!". They both began to laugh. This project brought them to realize that they're better off as good friends.

            Within the time of doing the project they didn't end up a real couple, but became great friends. They changed the school. Now, losers are going out with hot girls, cool guys are going out with smart girls, and jocks are hanging out with nerds. It doesn't matter who you present yourself to be, it's about who you really are.

            As Carly dropped off Seth at his home, she told him in sarcasm, "I'll see you tomorrow, boyfriend". "Really? You want to go out?", he asked. "No", she said, "We already said how we were better off as friends. What about friends with benefits?" She gave Seth a smirk and drove away. "Damn. That girl was my 'girlfriend'", he said and smiled.